1.Emily Blackwoods dad just built her a tree house in the backyard for her 10th birthday. It was the best tree house in the neighborhood and the kids were always stopping by to come play in it.
2. Emily Blackwood's summer was of to a slow start. Mostly she just sat around house, hung out with her best friend Lily, and occasionaly had a lemonade stand to make a little money.
3. Emily Blackwood was never the most popular girl in the neighborhood, most of the attention went to Angelica-her next door neighbor who had a very attractive older sister and always had lots of older kids at her house. This summer was going to be different, she now had an extremely impressive treehouse in her backyard, and if that didn't draw the kids in, nothing would.
4. "Did you see Emily's new tree house?"Tommy asked Lily.
"Yeah of course i was there when it was built" Lily added hautily.
"well can we play in it?" Tommy asked.
"NO, of Course NOT! We dont want your boy germs all over the tree house. Theres no boys allowed..sorry!" Lilyanswered
5. Emily was your average girl, about 5 foot, ten years old, blonde, wavy hair, not too skinny, but not plump either. Everything about her was average, and that is how it has always been. But This summer, She had an exceptional tree house in her backyard, and nobody else did. Now, for what seemed like the first time in her life, she was ahead of everyone!
2 comments:
Hey! I really liked the third intro that you wrote. It really makes me want to know what is going to happen next. I also think that people would like it because they can relate to not being the most popular but wanting to be. Good job!
hey i relly liked the fourth opening. the way they tell the guys they aren't allowed to come in.
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